I kind of wish the lettering were in a different font since it feels too cold for such a meaningful pose, but that's just me. I love how you managed to shade it while still being able to define the hair and objects using a similar lead weight.
Ah, that one's my fault, I'm pretty I'm the one who added the text here. ^_^; I dunno, something about the black and white sketchiness made me think of typewriters for some reason.